We were learning about how to write a interesting narrative
I found it easy to write the story because eden helped me
I found it hard to think of the ideas for the story
I really enjoyed writing this narrative and I really liked BOB and JEFFY
Next time I need to make it more funnier
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Kia ora Milah. My name is Kayleigh and I attend Mangapapa School in Gisborne, Tairawhiti. I thought that your writing post is really cool. I thought that adding your friends in the story was a great idea. Next time, you should add more descriptive words, more full stops and exclamation marks.
ReplyDeleteKind regards,
Kayleigh