Diving giraffes

 

We were learning to write a recount about diving giraffes, we were trying to hook our reader into our writing and also trying to use the best adjectives that we can use, we were trying to use interesting sentence starters to make our writing more interesting! We were trying to use figurative language to show the actions of the giraffes, also we were using level three vocabulary.

I enjoyed describing the giraffes in different ways, also I really enjoyed being the person in the story and describing how I felt and what I did, I enjoyed writing about something that's interesting to me so that  helped me write better.

I found it challenging to make all the sentences and paragraphs make sense. I had to make sure to include everything through the story and not miss anything out. I found it hard getting all the sentence starters interesting to make sure it includes everything.

Next time I need to use kaiwhakarite to work faster and get the job done. Also I could add more into my paragraphs to make sure the reader is hooked in throughout the story I could add more vocabulary to make my writing more interesting.