Onomatopoeia fireworks poem!

we were learning to use onomatopoeia, onomatopoeia is a word to describe the sound of something, for example if you were doing a cow it could be MOO or someone jumping into the water it could be SPLASH!  Our poem was about fireworks, we had to explain what fireworks sound like and what you think you'd see if you were watching and hearing fireworks.

I found it easy to add in all the onomatopoeia because I've been to watch fireworks so I know what kind of sounds there are when you listen to fireworks.

I found it hard to add enough detail to make it a big enough poem I also found it hard to make sure Im using similes and alliteration as well as onomatopoeia.

Next time I need to work faster at getting my ideas into the poem and not keep changing every time i think i'm finished.  I also need to get better at making sure it makes sense. 

I was a thinker/whaiwhakaaro, because I thought about all the best onomatopoeia that will fit my writing and make sure it makes sense. I was also a thinker because I used similes and alliteration in my poem as well as using onomatopoeia.