Friday, May 14, 2021

The Ancient creature


 
I was focusing on being a communicator and being able to share my ideas through writing!
I used a variety of sentence starters but next time I think I could level them up.
I used similes to make my writing more descriptive and I also used alliterations and great adjectives to describe.
Next time I plan to use better sentence starters so more people want to read it. 

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